In the world of industrial economy most persons need to do an occupation to earn money, after their school or university education, in order to meet their basic needs. Furthermore, everybody likes to get a job with adequate compensation in relation to the work or service done. It is nothing wrong if a person consider the size of the salary when he choosing a job. However, it has been argued that money should be the key consideration in selecting a job with everything else is second to it. In my opinion, it is a wrong approach in deciding the career this way and there are so many other factors to consider to avoid cheerless situation and career development in one's life.
Salary is an important thing to all of us to make our livings. We need to spend this money on foods, housing, clothing, traveling, education among many other things. Undoubtedly, city dwellers in metropolis such as Tokyo or London need much higher earnings as their cost of living is substantially high. If, we do not get adequate money for the work we done no body will keen to do that job as there is a risk of having a difficult life. This may be the reason why lot of parents do not want to select sports or music by their children even they are talented in these fields. However, if a person select the job depend on money alone there are certain other things that he might loss in life as well.
In addition to the money, factors such as happiness, job satisfaction and job security are also important things that one should think in enrolling for a job. Personal relationship and friendly environments are very important not only to work peacefully in the workplace but in professional achievements and target completion. Further, everyone of us may prefer to do a job in relation to the knowledge and skill we learnt in our schools or university time. In such circumstances job security also very high as we do our work more confidently. A person, who got medals for swimming during school time may prefer to work as swimming coach rather than work as an cook in a hotel.
In conclusion, although money needs to consider in choosing a job, obviously this does not play a pivotal role. Although, money give us a tangible value for our work, there are so many other intangibles which have a similar value or more to it in work place and personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59904534606 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70095582437 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517899761337 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3581462037 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.055555556 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2777777778 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304013733974 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931144977301 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722531055249 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182007810083 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518330529936 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.