The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

These bar charts give information about four types of carrier performance in England graduate and postgraduate students after finishing their college studies, other than full time work in 2008. Numbers of students are given in real figures.

Overall, further study is the most preferred carrier selection for both graduate and post graduate students. Furthermore, in general there are about a tenth of students are in postgraduate stream compared to graduate students.
According to the data, as high as 29,665 graduate pupils selected to do further study, and about one tenth of this number, which is 2,725 postgraduates choose to do further study. A similar proportion is observed in groups of unemployment and voluntary work groups as well. While, the former group in graduate and postgraduates were 16,235 and 1625 respectively, the latter group was 3500 and 350 in same order. On the other hand, part time work shows a different pattern and more favored by postgraduates. 17,735 number of graduates wanted to do part time work, this number is almost half the number of their further study group, whereas the part time post graduate number which 2,535 is almost ninety per cent of their counterpart further study group.

In conclusion, working destinations of both groups have similar trend except for voluntary work, which clearly selected by more postgraduates.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...shing their college studies, other than full time work in 2008. Numbers of students are g...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tenths'?
Suggestion: tenths
...rthermore, in general there are about a tenth of students are in postgraduate stream ...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...d 350 in same order. On the other hand, part time work shows a different pattern and more...
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Line 4, column 547, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...17,735 number of graduates wanted to do part time work, this number is almost half the nu...
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Line 4, column 643, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... their further study group, whereas the part time post graduate number which 2,535 is alm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, well, whereas, while, except for, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31651376147 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7777757671 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8548083581 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183246506487 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079706938918 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583997169151 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127298848885 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643034479362 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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