Zoos are harmful for animals and should be banned, do you agree or disagree?
In this era animals don’t have a safest place to live because forest area is reducing. Some people believe that zoos should be banned and provide the rights to animals while other claim that zoos should not be banned. I believe that zoos should not be banned and authorities should change some minor changes and provide the animal free habitat. There are many reasons why zoos not be banned.
Firstly, there are many advantages with zoos, these days due to deforestation forest are cutting down animals does not have a place to live and they are hunting. Till now many different types of species are Extincted. According to the report from the forest department, more than 80% of forest it deforested until 2015 and more than 500 types of species are Extincted.
Secondly, these days authority of zoos providing a natural habitat to the animals and providing the free space like forest and giving a required food. In addition, forest department are saving many different types of species from danger. According to the survey conducted in African Zoo there are more than 600 types of species. Zoos are very important to these generation children where they can able to see different types of animals, birds and many more at one place.
In conclusion, in this era Zoos are managed not only to exhibit them to people, but to save the species which are endangered from people and other animals. Zoos management should provide a natural environment to animals without claiming their rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96031746032 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42646967878 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2880995341 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218331787861 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946816364311 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104502973041 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138819472134 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121923213234 0.0609392437508 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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