The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
» You should write at least 150 words.
Demand for electricity in England during winter & summer
The line graph illustrates, electricity needs in different hours a day at the time of winter and summer in England. While, pie chart demonstrates, the average electricity usage in a home for four various purposes.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that, demand of electric power was highest during winter especially in mid night. Although, there were slight fluctuations through out the days. Whereas, the largest amount of current used for heating room and water.
As is observed in the line graph, overwhelming majority of electricity used for at the period of winter. Such as, in the early hours of winter, approximately, 35,000 units of electricity consumed in London citizens. While, for the next 3 hours usage increased to 40000 units and dipped into 30000 for the following hours. Then there was a significant surge in the electricity demand for the consecutive hours and reached at the peak with about 50000 units in early midnight at 22 hours. However, again consumption of electricity plummet to near 35,000 in 1 'o'clock. Similarly, in summer, mere less than 20000 unit of electricity were used in most of the hours. Although, there were fluctuation in demand, the biggest consuming hour was in the after noon and mid night with 20000 units.
However, regarding heating of room and water was the noticeable usage of electric power in average England home which is about 52%. At once, lighting, TV, Radio and other electric machines namely, vaccum cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools consists of around 15% of total energy respectively. Whilst, 18% of electricity accounted for the use of oven, kettles, and washing machines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... during winter especially in mid night. Although, there were slight fluctuations through...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...lthough, there were slight fluctuations through out the days. Whereas, the largest amount o...
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Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in consumption of electricity plummet to near 35,000 in 1 oclock. Similarly, in ...
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Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...lectricity plummet to near 35,000 in 1 oclock. Similarly, in summer, mere less than ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, similarly, then, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12592592593 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74234187465 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9178145786 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283658313389 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103693503134 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633717448877 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196252267029 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630891194959 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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