The line graph illustrates, the percentage of age 65 and above population in Japan, Swedan and USA from 1940 to 2040. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall, all the given countries population rate was increasing by years. The most significant growth of elderly was in Japan after 2020 from the least level. USA replace the top position and holds low level by the end of the period.
In 1940, USA was the highest level in geriatric people with approximately nine percent. The figure went slightly up after 2o years and reached to ten percent. After the two decade the percentage of population climbed up dramatically to 15 %. Then, the graph remained relatively stable up to 2020 and surged to just below 25 % by 2040. In comparison, USA was the lowest level of aged population among other countries by 2040.
Regarding elderly people rate in Swedan and Japan was approximately 7% and 5% respectively in 1940. Then Swedan rate was gradually increased to about 14 % after a four decades. In 1990, Swedan exceeding USA and rapidly climbed to 20%. Then there was a little decline to almost 17% before touched to over 25% by 2040. Furthermore, Japan was the only country that decreasing the population rate in first four decades and reach beginning rate after 2020. While, after that which went suddenly upward and remain at the peak level with nearly 28%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62899369728 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562770562771 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1287955784 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.875 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114136784302 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419363178357 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568891324751 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899440698507 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634779806051 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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