Time go fast , so it is not acceptebale to wast it in fights and quarrels ,rather than spend a presious moments with ours families . However there is some people think that it is important to take a time out from their familles sometimes to discover if they are important for them or not. In my opinion it is a wrong way to think , and I will explain why in the following essay.
First of all, human being is social by nature , so the relationships are important for him in first place than others, thus , to have a peaceful live we must get a good relationships , and when the person starts to debt in those relationships that problems comes , and as a compelling example, I have a aunt who is in divorce process now with two kids , just because her husband starts to get away from them all the time and don’t care of them anymore . Maybe he was adopting this approach and as a result he is loosing his family.
Secondly, a caring person is loved by every one . And has a good impact on others . And by writing those lines comes in my mind my mother , I can’t just imagine a mother thinking like that , being away from her kids just to see if they loves her or not .
In conclusion, I strongly believe that love and care are the important elements in any relationship , and it is hard to show that if we are faraway from who we care about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31349206349 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50121097352 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56746031746 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.817247671 48.9658058833 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.777777778 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.45110844103 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340416885496 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109628590765 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10356337356 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19262445038 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865504239609 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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