Literature is a vital part of the nation to analyze enhancing variety of particular subject or history.Some people reckon that educating local literature to student may be more beneficial than other countries literary works. I strongly disagree as i would contend that local literature does not help students to improve the knowledge about globe and different cultures.
to embark on, literature of home country may be too boring sometimes because mostly young ones are aware about the history, language and culture of where that are born in and this makes learning extremely frustrating . For example, the massacre of Jallianwala Bagh is known to many individuals but still this incident is being in lessons in the initial stage of academic curriculum and thus most of the students are reluctant to study the subject. Foreign language gives them a totally new learning experience and thus it could provide them with the motivation to study the subject.
Furthermore, literature of other countries exposes the students to a variety of different cultures so studying it helps in broadening their knowledge about the other parts of the world. For instance, the trend of brain drain has been elevated in the recent years due to which young people are migrating to foreign countries in the pursuit of study and employment opportunities. Thus, the knowledge about the literary works of other nations would assist them in settlement and adjustments.
To recapitulate, I would say that learning and teaching multi literal works would exaggerate the value of own nation along with others. So, foreign works should also be considered as a significant part of curriculum.
- Many People like to wear fashionable clothes.Why do you think this is the caseIs this a good thing or bad thing. 84
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- Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on the idea that they are also responsible bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagr 78
- Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.Write a letter to the hospital. In your letterExplain why you would like to do unpaid work at 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25468164794 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82400079814 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8742263366 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159076419298 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605389110789 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602369219978 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974060976716 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063437309533 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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