Hello Dam,
I've been waiting to your letter since long. Guess what ? I've got a book that you'd be intrigued to read.
This book is really subtle and detailed about king Shivaji called "The king'. Though that's a fictious story written and
explained in book, it keeps one involved in until its finished. This book explained me about intelligence of the emperor to build his empire. I'm sure you'd go and get that book it comes for just 200 bugs.
The author said this book can be available both online as well as offline at any book store. Let me know I'm supposed to order to you. Furthermore, there are many other people selling pirated versions at cheaper rates. I know you are a master at getting that way.
Finally, like I said this is a must buy and read book once in our life. If I'm not wrong you're planning to set up a play soon ?
You may just copy down dialogue and script from this book. You'd surely save your hassle
All the best for your play, and look forward to hear from you about this book
Best regards
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Schedule Hello Dam, Ive been waiting to your letter since lo...
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Schedule Hello Dam, Ive been waiting to your letter since long....
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...to your letter since long. Guess what ? Ive got a book that youd be intrigued to re...
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... long. Guess what ? Ive got a book that youd be intrigued to read. This book is rea...
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...g Shivaji called 'The king. Though thats a fictious story written and explained...
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...nce of the emperor to build his empire. Im sure youd go and get that book it comes...
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...he emperor to build his empire. Im sure youd go and get that book it comes for just ...
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Suggestion: and
... this book can be available both online as well as offline at any book store. Let me know ...
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... buy and read book once in our life. If Im not wrong youre planning to set up a pl...
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... book once in our life. If Im not wrong youre planning to set up a play soon ? You m...
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Suggestion: You'd
...own dialogue and script from this book. Youd surely save your hassle All the best...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...he best for your play, and look forward to hear from you about this book Best regard...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, may, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45595854922 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06705474501 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694300518135 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8961566449 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4285714286 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39613396853 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120935833587 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069287480286 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188948231318 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431054071656 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.