Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Advent of technology Not only has had conspicuous impacts on science and peoples’ life style, but also it has affected the way we communicate. There is much debate about whether the Television has destroyed the communication among family members and friends or not. Although some people believe that people spend most of their free time on watching Television instead of interacting with their friends and family members, I am of the opinion that Television programs have not hindered communication among family members and friends, and such a belief is based on the reasons elaborated on follow:
First, I think that one of the goals that social media especially television serves is to produce and broadcast programs that encourage relations among people. There is no doubt that not all the programs and films have moral lessons, or even worse, they might encourage violence and have negative impacts on people especially those under lawful age. However, I think Television programs especially those showed on state channels have the policy of showing films with plots that reinforce more intimate communications among people. By a way of example, in my country between 8 to 11 P.M when most of the people are free, and have time to watch Television, many of the series and films broadcasted are family genres which show family issues with moral lessons in the endings.
I addition to the Television programs, watching Television provides the opportunity for the family members or friends to gather and discuss many different subjects. People mostly watch Television when they want to relax and enjoy their time, that is why it provides them with a good reason to gather with their loved ones to enjoy their time even more. In addition, after watching television they have many subjects to talk about about the shows or the worldwide news they have seen on Tv. For example my friends and I normally gather on Friday night to watch a film together, and after the film is finished we discuss the details of the film. Consequently, beside providing the chance of seeing my friend, watching Television gives us the subject to talk. Otherwise we would most probably gossip about our colleagues at work.
In conclusion, and on the basis of the aforementioned agreements, I would like to reiterate that I believe that Television has not destroyed communication. I feel this because many of the films shown on Television encourage communication, and because watching Television provides us with the opportunity to get together with our friends and family members and give us the subjects we can talk about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08624708625 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76383556121 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477855477855 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.670310666 48.9658058833 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.846153846 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.6045352989 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178877497049 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739099379913 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608658202352 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124629462144 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482095746209 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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