In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There is a debate in different parts of the world regarding whether children have to follow strict rules of behaviour or not. I strongly believe that kids should have limits established by their parents in order to become more responsible adults in the future. I hold this opinion for many reasons that I will expose in this essay.
Firstly, it is crucial to make sure young people are able to discern what is right from what is wrong, and the consequences of their behaviour. Although some children are too young to understand all the complexity of their choices, I believe that if they are taught since they are still infants, they have more chances to learn it properly and follow these instructions when they become older.
In addition, kids must learn they role in society and develop sense of responsibility in order to ensure the continuity of a health generation that respects each other. There have been many researches about the fact that absent parents are the most common cause of kids with legal problems. Some examples are the children who get involved to drugs and live a life of crime since they are very young because of the fact that they have had no instruction at all.
To sum up, I believe that to have a next generation that holds principles of honesty and love, it is important to stablish limits since the early years of life, teaching the right behaviour that it is expected from them. Hence, we will have adults well instructed and capable of love, able to look after the next and understand their roles in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...life of crime since they are very young because of the fact that they have had no instruction at all. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, regarding, so, still, well, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73062730627 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45330570773 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546125461255 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.85990176 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.2 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264657880053 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976108434805 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07422049028 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154129225746 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562166506304 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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