College days can not be compared with other days.College days are the days of golden memories to the students.We get
chance to be with our friends.We get chance to make a good friend who can be supporter to us in up coming future.
We student get chance to have fun and a good relation and a good quality education in college days respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: College
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Suggestion: We
...days of golden memories to the students.We get chance to be with our friends.We ...
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...f golden memories to the students.We get chance to be with our friends.We get cha...
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Suggestion: We
....We get chance to be with our friends.We get chance to make a good friend who ca...
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Suggestion:
...e supporter to us in up coming future. We student get chance to have fun and a ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pporter to us in up coming future. We student get chance to have fun and a go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 285.0 965.302439024 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 63.0 196.424390244 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52380952381 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.81731324726 3.73543355544 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76500464608 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 40.0 106.607317073 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 91.8 283.868780488 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212289431616 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16656678232 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323678021973 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158238105374 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140050189027 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 40.7170731707 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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