In this world there are different types of artist.Some Artist are very talented on their field.they easily can get the attention of people in the short period they can earn a huge money similarly some artist cannot earn a money they required or they deserve.there are different artist like actor,writer,painter,etc.
In our society we can see that some famous actor get a big money to act in some movies or drama but the one of the talented actor who works very hard but he is not famous in the society or a country people does not pay the same amount to them.people only want a fem person not a hardworking.So the some artist are really pitiful.
In my opinion government have to take a step on this problem .Every artist should be pay same money .Government have to throw out the discrimination problems .It also helps to developed a good and a very talented artist on the society.Sometimes we find the people who are very good artist but they left left their work because they do not get the amount what they deserved.
To protect the artist government have to solve the problem on it .Artist are one of the those people who represented their country on the world.not everyone can be a artist it was the blessed of god not everyone can get it .
government have to make some strict rules on this .Artist are those who deserved a huge respect .Goverment have to favere on artist .goverment have to gave a justice to artist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rld there are different types of artist.Some Artist are very talented on their field...
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...e different types of artist.Some Artist are very talented on their field.they easil...
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...y we can see that some famous actor get a big money to act in some movies or drama but the ...
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...st should be pay same money .Government have to throw out the discrimination problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, similarly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58203125 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90174298325 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5936636353 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 234.6 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.2 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214348443724 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127075422463 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536013961586 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127075422463 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536013961586 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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