Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In devel

It is believed that education is one of the most important parts of human beings. Some experts suggest that education should be given to all individual in free of cost. In my opinion, education should be given to all individuals in free of cost. We know that education is very important for human beings. Each and every person should have education for their empowerment. Education is one of the best sources of development. We can see that well educated countries are developed due to the influence of education.
In addition to this, there are different categories of people on the basis of capital. Some are rich and some are even cannot able to manage their basic things such as food, shelter and clothes. Those people who cannot afford their basic things may not afford money in education. At present world, the schools and college are very expensive so that people are facing problem to get quality education not only rural areas but also in urban areas. Nowadays, all people cannot afford their fees therefore, they will be uneducated. In our society, there are many schools and colleges. Each and every education center has its own quality education. It is true that, some are very expensive schools and some are colleges which provide very high quality education and some cheap college are not able to give same quality of education to their student so only the rich people can get quality education as they want but who cannot afford fee they have to satisfied what they have.
Each and every country had to provide education to all individuals in free of cost. All people have their right to take an education in their own subject what they choose every sector of education should be free. People who want to be a doctor but they cannot able to study what they want at last they choose some subject which they can able to pay. It is the fact that free education helps to develop the nation. As a result, education helps to make a good business. If there is education there are many way of works people cannot stay unemployed.
In conclusion, it can be said that government should provide high quality education in free cost so that all people can take a education. If the educated people high there is chance of high new innovation. People can get many benefits with the help of education so that education should be given in free of cost.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98107255521 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81587754997 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441640378549 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 198.930741717 49.4020404114 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.8 106.682146367 296% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.4 20.7667163134 305% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131114229233 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887709586505 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367666232194 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100329564453 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327821832977 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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