Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Change is the only thing that is constant in life. Changes happen every day, every minute and for this change we are the sole responsible. This is because we brought this change and I believe that no one would be less happy or less satisfied due to this change. To say, I disagree with the statement that the quick change of this world is making people less happy and less satisfied. I have few reasons to support my opinion which I would be exploring in my next paragraphs.
First and the foremost thing that is playing a key role to this change is advent of technology. Technology has brought us many things ranging from grass root to galaxies. That is to say that we have advanced in technology in such a way that we can analyze a microscopic bacteria and at the same time we can also observe the planetary motion in the sky. This tremendous change in technology has helped people in various ways. It has helped to lead a simple and convenient life. One simple example that would be appropriate is technology in cooking. Today eight out of ten homes would have microwave ovens. These ovens does the cooking work within in minutes that used to take hours in the past. The life has become easier, simpler and also faster. This means people are happy.
Furthermore, this advancement has helped people connect each other very easily. The advent of technologies in transportation sector, communication field has helped people to grow connections. People connect using cellphones, social media and other mediums. They connect each other and share ideas and knowledge. The transportation is also made easy nowadays. For example, my grandfather use to ride on bicycle to meet a person and convey the message. But today, connecting with people has become so easy that it cane happen with the a single click. That is we can send messages through phones or fly using airbus to connect with the people. Hence, this improvement has made people satisfied and also happy.
To wrap up, I totally do not support the fact that people today are less happy and less satisfied. In fact, this faster life has made our adaptable rate more because changes are happening everyday. It is making our lives more easier, simpler and efficient. For this people are happy and also satisfied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'do'.
Suggestion: do
...would have microwave ovens. These ovens does the cooking work within in minutes that...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...y nowadays. For example, my grandfather use to ride on bicycle to meet a person and...
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Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...become so easy that it cane happen with the a single click. That is we can send messa...
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Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[10]
Message: The pronoun is must be used with 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ne happen with the a single click. That is we can send messages through phones or ...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...rate more because changes are happening everyday. It is making our lives more easier, si...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...pening everyday. It is making our lives more easier, simpler and efficient. For this people...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...more easier, simpler and efficient. For this people are happy and also satisfied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, for example, in fact, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78371501272 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53978947865 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493638676845 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6286805369 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1428571429 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0357142857 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248439017294 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666315664332 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857469891452 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162759772545 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761663778992 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.