Imagine that there is a large piece of vacant land in your town. What is the best way to make use of it? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although some people might think to build hotel or recreation area to enhance provileges, but I would like to
construct tuiton clases on the land in my town to ehance children's' performance. I would be to explore reasons for my opinion in the following essay:
It is necessary to strengthen base of child atearly age
best way to consruct education centre to overcome academic weakness
These days pschychological problems dyslexia, attention deficit disorders and anxiety
are not uncommon. To address those issue ther is stringent need to implement highly euipped
centre with advanced facility and scholars. This settle will enable camaraderie for
the learning students by regularly interacting with teachers. It is undeniable truth that
professors are top notch scholars with abundant knowledge about subjects and ability to connect
well with different student's mindset. For instance, one of my friend's kid was sufering from dyslexia
but no one noticed until he scored low grades in English exam consistently. Worried parents heard about
Kummon in their area and admitted child there. Surprinsingly, with the support and strategies to enhance learning
and reading he cleared all his English exams with flying colours just with in one yearof coaching clases.
Another reason that deserves attention is sound education makes someone better parents.
It is well know fact that young uneducated single parents are overwhlemed with financial crisis and other mental disorders,
so they are least interested in shaping child's future. In contrast, educated parents work strenously to instill good vlaues
and to notice kid's deficiency that insulates their progression. If child's education is jeaopardized then vicious cycle will continue that is uneducated child when become parent might fail to think wisely for own kids. As a result, lietracy level as a whole might plummet and poverty might skyrocket in near future. In addition, some country shools barely pay attention to all the student's needs due tomore students in class that is way just sending children to school might not eradicate society problem in general. Thus, educating adolescents in wide variety of ways ensures beneficial upbrining of future progreny and eventually entire nation.
To sum up, to open up educational classes brought concrete benefits such as enriching weak students brain and educating future parents in wide variety of ways. As a result, effecive use of land is to provide opportunity to the rising children to shine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in general, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45663265306 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72634152276 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8171966702 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.823529412 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.53405017921 397% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0658729217523 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021541219506 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330957438763 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0190157091098 0.150856017488 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298853224748 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.