Nowadays, people move from one country to another for work. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this, while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both views and give your opinoin.
Migrating to new territories for the purpose of improved career opportunities has become a trend nowadays among the communities in the world. Some believe it is fruitful to raise children in such an atmosphere while the rest think it will make them more desperate. I think it is a good decision to move to another country for better professions since it benefits the children as well.
To begin with, many people are looking for advancement in their careers and life styles in this cut throat competition that is prevailing in the society today. Added values and increased levels of life style such as increased health facilities, medical insurances and schemes, educational loans, standard and reputed educational institutes, child entertainment facilities bring the children of migrated families a wide range of benefits that wouldn't have been there in the native countries. Apart from that , exposure to multi-cultural atmosphere helps to build a strong, flexible and an out goining personality in them. As a result those children become thorough with multiple languages, different cultures, wide area of geography and many more positive aspects.
On the other hand, it is observed by some that children of the families who move from country to country are facing difficulties in their lives due to this geographical shift that their parents do inorder to find new jobs. This can be due to separation from the intimated friends and relatives, challange in adopting themselves in to a new environment or disturbed schooling. Although apparently these may seem hard for younger ones, their volatile minds act so fast to absorb these changes in a very short time. For example, children who migrate to other countries with their parents are reluctant to visit their previous homeland after some time. This is an evident which shows that the difficulties are just mood swings or very temporary.
As a whole, I believe that the positives that children experience in the long term are immense with respect to the temporary short comings explained in the above. Therefore, it is right to say that moving to new lands for new career opportunities, favour the children of those families in many ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... families a wide range of benefits that wouldnt have been there in the native countries...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in the native countries. Apart from that , exposure to multi-cultural atmosphere h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, i think, such as, as a result, to begin with, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15083798883 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83982159858 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575418994413 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8707053319 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277630838515 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876856337591 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614229547201 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15523767272 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586462301088 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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