Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem.
It is a visible fact in all parts of the world today that criminals tend to indulge themselves in more crimes after they have been penalized for the very first time. In this essay I will discuss the above problem and some solutions that can be considered in overcoming it.
Firstly, many criminals commit more crimes after being punished for the first time for reasons such as the punishments are too lenient than the crime and exposure to intermingle with various criminals when in prison. If a criminal had received a punishment that is too light in scale than the gravity of the crime that he has commited, then that criminal has less opportunity to learn a lesson out of it, resulting him to tend towards more crimes. For example, a drug trafficker if caught for the first time, would most of the time be released to the society after being imprisoned for a short time. Thus he will again indulge in doing the same again and again. Also if a first time criminal while in jail has the chance to intermingle with all the other minor and major criminals, then there's more space and possibility of him learning ways and means of commiting crimes by sharing views and opinions of them. Thus he will eventually commit more crimes once he has the opportunity to do so.
As solutions to the aforesaid situation, establishing a serious, standard scale of punishments to suit the relevant crime and establishing a separation method to separate out the criminals inside the prison can be suggested. If the scale of punishments is made too tough then the first time offenders would not go for commiting crimes for a second time. For example, if the punishment for a rapist is upgraded to death sentence, then there'll be no second chance for such criminals to do the same or other ever again. Apart from that, establishing separate cubicals for minor and major criminals separately without letting them space to intermingle with each other would result in reduced communication among them, so that crime-knowledge sharing is also reduced.
In conclusion, the fact that many criminals tend to commit more crimes after being punished for the first time, can be adressed by taking necessary steps to establish a standard punishment scale and exercising a seperation mechanism for criminals inside prison.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88746803069 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70359216364 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460358056266 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7882303578 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0769230769 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199500571318 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886770336299 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584980425282 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157042463044 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468266872625 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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