You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you hale and hearty. I am aware that you are pretty much interested in current affairs, be it local or international. One political party in my country took the initiative of Billion Tree Tsunami Program (BTTP). Let me enlighten you about the goals and ambitions of the program. My country is one those who are facing environmental challenges. As a proactive measure, the party has initiated this project to battle with the pollution and forthcoming issues intact to it.
There are many cities where people are deprived of clean air and water. By planting trees we can bring drastic changes in our environment and weather. Owing to ozone layer destruction, weather is getting hotter every day and winter span has reduced to couple of months. Before commencing the project, the team had organized awareness roadshows across the country. Fortunately, people have responded very positively to this project and are taking part with great enthusiasm. They have understood the sheer importance and need of massive tree plantation.
I have been a core member of this project cross functional team and had conducted awareness session across the country. I personally feel accomplished and contented that in a way we are contributing to save the planet. Working on this program has been an emotional and amazing journey.
I would like to know your views about this achievement. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Lene
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-02-05 | dipen.a.shah | 78 | view |
| 2019-02-05 | dipen.a.shah | 78 | view |
- In Some Areas Of The US, Teenagers Are Not Allowed To Be Out Of Door After A Particular Time Of Night | Band 8 IELTS Essay Sample 56
- You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter• explain why you are writing• describe 78
- Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant 61
- Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a negative or positive development? 78
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons f 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you hale and hear...
^^^
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce and need of massive tree plantation. I have been a core member of this projec...
^^^
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...about this achievement. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Len...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Lene
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78287171821 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679166666667 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6798273027 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4444444444 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05555555556 4.34317383033 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134237181804 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416309420584 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488935303216 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696535153104 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404126451252 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.