the results of a research, which examines the average percentage marks secured by boys and girls of different ages in several School subjects, are given below.
The given tabular representation depicts the average percentage of marks scored by boys and girls of several age groups in different subjects. The data is calibrated in percentum, which is clear that coherently represented.
By visualising the information, it is observed that, 4 age groups; 7 years, 10 years, 13 years and 15 years are examined for five distinct subjects; Mathematics, Science, Geography, Sports and Language.
It can be observed from statistics, that there is not much difference in marks of girls and boys during age of 7 years in every subject, except for sports; in which boys are ahead of girls by 6%. On contrast to this; during 10 years age, marks obtained by girls in Language is more, whereas in Sports boys scored more than girls.
Furthermore, in 13 years age; boys scored more marks in all subjects, except in language, that is 5% lesser than girls. Comparing to this; during the 15 years age, a huge difference was observed in Sports subject, that is, 70% marks and 60% marks for boys and girls respectively. Language marks obtained by girls are more, 75%, than boys who got 58% only. ln rest of subjects; Science, Mathematics and Geography the marks are almost similar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ln
... more, 75%, than boys who got 58% only. ln rest of subjects; Science, Mathematics ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, whereas, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9362745098 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75639743793 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7580601749 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.888888889 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352046593288 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164950040843 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11748633507 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237837316092 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115250808976 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.