The diagram shows the stages and equipment used in cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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The diagram shows the stages and equipment used in cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The given diagram represents the steps and machinery employed in the cement manufacturing process and the way how cement is used to produce can create for infrastructure purpose.

There are four main steps in cement manufacturing from; crushing to the grinding, whereas concrete manufacturing involve only one step, that is, mixing the raw material provided.

At the first stage, the raw material, that is, limestone and clay is fed in the crusher to form the powder.Further, the powder is mixed well in the mixture and passed from a rotating heater for heating purpose.In last step,the heated mixture is ground well in the grinder to form cement.The cement is further packed in bags for shipping purpose.

Moving further, in concrete preparation cement, water, sand and gravel are added in the concentration of 15%, 10%, 25% and 50% respectively. the whole raw material is mixed in concrete mixer to form the final product.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Further
...s fed in the crusher to form the powder.Further, the powder is mixed well in the mixtur...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...m a rotating heater for heating purpose.In last step,the heated mixture is ground ...
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Suggestion: , the
... heater for heating purpose.In last step,the heated mixture is ground well in the gr...
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Suggestion: The
...ound well in the grinder to form cement.The cement is further packed in bags for sh...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... of 15%, 10%, 25% and 50% respectively. the whole raw material is mixed in concrete...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, well, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19867549669 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89816639425 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9844930311 43.030603864 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.0 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264083748548 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140207575342 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120913928076 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166134355624 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122469621151 0.0819641961636 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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