Nowadays people are buying many things even though they don’t really need them.
Why it is happening in your opinion. Is it negative or positive trend?
It is matter of concern that in present days individuals are buying things which they don’t really require. I believe, that this emerging trend is because companies uses different marketing strategies and provide easy payment options for consumers. There are several drawbacks associated with such lavish shopping.
I firmly believe that advertisements and easy payments options pays crucial role to attract customers. Firstly, companies are using various marketing strategies to stimulate consumers. They not only use celebrities but also famous personalities to captivate buyers, as people consider them epitome of fashion and trend they incline to buy these products. Secondly, due to the technology advancement making payments are made easy and affordable for customers. EMI and credit card payment options make things more accessible for customers, people can procure items even if they are beyond their purchasing power.
The recent trend of buying unwanted items surely have some serious adverse impact on consumers. Firstly, the desire of buying unnecessary things increases financial burden on buyers and surge in crime rates. One major drawback is the liability of repay the enormous debts generated by extra shopping using credit card as well as EMI facilities. If customer fails to re-pay the payment due to money crunch, the banks and companies recover the money from defaulters by sieging the product, thus it causes lot of mental stress. Another negative aspect is that owing to the craze to attain latest electronic gadgets as well as fashion accessories, youngsters indulge in anti-social activities to find the source of money to buy these merchandises.
In conclusion, though various reasons have caused recent increase in excessive shopping by people, I believe this is a negative development, since it not only overburdens the customers with loans and debts but also forces teenagers into illegal activities. It is suggested that ads particularly attracting adults and teenagers should be banned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 580, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'attain the latest'.
Suggestion: attain the latest
...ve aspect is that owing to the craze to attain latest electronic gadgets as well as fashion a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55483870968 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80978667244 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5204382314 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174916634743 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517065252233 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683353682458 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986573730082 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452408607825 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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