do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
solitude, spending time alone, is one of our best teachers.
use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In the different levels of our life we always need someone to learn us how we should do something or how we should treat. These teachers have diverse social personality in each period of our life. For example, when we born our first teachers are our mother and father or in some manner older brother and sister. After that in school we have teachers and beside them our friends who have an important role in our learning. Despite of all these people we have another teacher that has an incredible effect in our life and that is ourselves. By ourselves I mean the time that we are alone and we don’t share that time with nobody else. I will try to examine below the specific reason for illustrating my opinion.
First, when we spend time alone, we let ourselves to think more about what we did and want to do. In my opinion the best teacher for me is myself. No one can help me better myself because I know myself better than others. It is possible that I pretend in different situation against others people or I say lie to them but it isn’t possible to lie myself. When I do something wrong or I have terrible experiences in my alone time I can think about them, about the negative and positive aspects of what I did or said. Moreover I can put myself in that condition again in my mind and try to find out the best way for showing reaction in others similar situation. I think what happened in my life are the best sources for learning something new.
Furthermore, giving time to myself is a best help for making my future better. For example, in my first level of high school I didn’t study a lot and my marks weren’t good and that was because my friends and the manner that I was in, so I decides to change my school for second level. In new school I didn’t have any friends and I was just with myself and I didn’t want to make friendship, I thought I need some time to be alone, that solitude helped me to understand what I want to do in my future and for what I should try. I found my goal and I’ve tried for that and now in this time I see the results that make my life perfect and improve my good behaviors and modify my bad personalities.
To sum up, for the reasons were stated above I consider that spending sometimes alone in life make us to learn more things and improve our life and make some plans for future. Being alone thinking about ourselves is the best teacher that we can have for all of the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...positive aspects of what I did or said. Moreover I can put myself in that condition agai...
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'decide'
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...s the best teacher that we can have for all of the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, for example, i mean, i think, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 98.0 43.0788530466 227% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4041607955 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439393939394 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3877713339 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130872769376 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516221058877 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316860605665 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866132439978 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269444259911 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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