TPO 41
The reading passage and the lecture are both about new regulation for handeling and storing coal ash. While the passage states that there are several reasons to show that the new regulations are not seem necessary the lecture contradicts these claims and provides the evidence to the contrary.
First, the author argues that there are ristricted regulations for example the companies use much more liner when a new landfill is built. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that liner are not sufficient and liner just utilize for new landfill but there are several old field that could polluted envirenment.
Second, the according to the passage producers would discourage to recycle coal ash to new products because the cunsomer avoid to buy and use these products. However, the professor makes it clear by mentions mercury example. While the rules of mercury recycling are more restricted the companies are not give up recycling this substance.
Furtheremore, the passage holds the view that some new strict regulations are not economical convincing for companies and as a result the price of electricity bill will be increase. In contrary, the professor underlines the fact that of course electricity fee will be increase as a result of these rules but its advantageous weigh its disadvantageous. In this fashion, the fee increase for each bill would be about 1 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...o show that the new regulations are not seem necessary the lecture contradicts these...
^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
... new landfill but there are several old field that could polluted envirenment. Secon...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid buying'.
Suggestion: avoid buying
...sh to new products because the cunsomer avoid to buy and use these products. However, the pr...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s it clear by mentions mercury example. While the rules of mercury recycling are more...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, however, second, so, while, for example, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19642857143 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80419692749 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540178571429 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6055042397 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346061358248 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134263523861 0.0996497079465 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09304286405 0.0662205650399 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193996580988 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352640281926 0.0443174109184 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.