You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You should write at least 150 words
Dear Sir,
My Name is Nilesh Pandey. I am living in the College Room Number B-1204 which I am sharing with another Student. I am writing this letter to draw your immediate attention to the daily problems that I am facing with the roommate.
Let me explain the problem in detail. First, my roommate is standing up for the upcoming elections for the Student Leader in the college. Because of this, there are always other students visiting the room thereby room is always noisy and making it hard for me to concentrate on studies. Second, he always arranges late might parties in the room and plays loud music so I am unable to get a good sleep. Third, this is the most serious one, my belongings are used by him without asking my permission.
I would really appreciate if you can shift me to a new room in the next term. Meanwhile, I would like to be moved to a different room for a month to prepare for the upcoming exams.
I request your immediate attention and action on this matter.
Yours Faithfully,
Nilesh J Pandey
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5752688172 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46497607786 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2258633525 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9166666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198241597888 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625970118642 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611029703752 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107386430857 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513216191813 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.