The benefits and downsides of Laser eye surgery.

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The benefits and downsides of Laser eye surgery.

In this set of material, the problem discussed is about laser eye surgery. In the reading part the author mentions some points which makes eye laser surgery too costly, not efficient, even dangerous. While, the lecturer points out the weaknesses of the author’s reasons and proves that the eye laser surgery is not to costly, effective and safe way of vision correction.
First of all, the author highlights that the price of this procedure is too high which is unaffordable for most of pat of patients. In his turn the lecturer mentions that the price is decreasing because of two factors. First, the cost of technology goes down and the competition in this part of medical services goes up which make the price of eye laser surgery decrease. That is why the procedure is more affordable than in the past.
The authors second reason is about post-operative problems that can appear. Moreover, the author mentions some cases when the patients had serious problems after the surgery like detachment of the cornea or too long recovery period. The lecturer finds this point at least ridiculous because they are exaggerated. That is because the detachment of the cornea took place because the patient climbed the Everest during the recovery period, and the real duration of the recovery period is only two or three days.
Beyond that, the author points out the need of going back for a new eye procedure in some years even months, which make surgery inefficient. The lecturer contradicts this reason with the facts that some patients need to go back only after twenty years after surgery or more. That is why the lecturer finds that the laser eye surgery is on of the most effective procedures.
To sum up, in these two passages the author and the lecturer present their conflicting views about laser eye surgery. The author mentions some reason against the surgery, while the lecturer points out reasonable doubts about them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...rer finds that the laser eye surgery is on of the most effective procedures. To s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, so, while, at least, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 325.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95076923077 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51146295092 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5923861972 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5625 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171818604754 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734113323492 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910752630552 0.0662205650399 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118789123465 0.162205337803 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905252882053 0.0443174109184 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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