The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the number of requests sent to the Tourist Information Office in a city in the first half of the year 2011.
Overall, the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in person and by telephone increased, while the figure for letter/email decreased over a six-month period in 2011. In addition, the Office experienced the biggest change in the number of questions in person.
In January 2011, there were over 400 requests sent to the Office in person, whereas the figures by letter/email and telephone were higher, at about 750 and 900 requests respectively. In April 2011, the number of inquiries which were delivered to the Office in person and by telephone rose to approximately 1220 and 1000 in a row. By contrast, the figure by letter/email went down to about 350 requests.
By June 2011, the number of requests sent to the Office in person reached the highest point at around 1900 requests, a rise of nearly three times over a six-month period in 2011 in comparison with a significant increase of about 700 telephone requests and a fall of about 400 letter/email requests

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...bout 750 and 900 requests respectively. In April 2011, the number of inquiries whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93684210526 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85978903974 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452631578947 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0610495969 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242150770557 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130892612736 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102217178507 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187441480923 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082440526564 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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