The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provides information about the contents which were inquired by the Tourist Information Office in one city.
Overall, it can be seen that enquiries of information in person and enquiries of information by telephone increased, while the other enquiries of information by letter/email decreased over the period shown.
Looking at the chart in more detail, it is evident that the number of enquiries in person increased from about 400 in January to about 1700 in June. which the highest of the chart. In contrast, the number of enquiries by letter/email decreased from about 750 in January to about 390 in June.
Turning to the remaining one data set, it can be seen that the number of enquiries by telephone which was inquired started approximately 900 in January, and grew 1600 over the six-month period in 2011.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-27 | Maleeha | 67 | view |
| 2019-12-15 | KIM JINUK | 56 | view |
| 2019-11-15 | SandraWolfie | 84 | view |
| 2019-08-26 | Nguyễn Hương Giang | 78 | view |
| 2019-08-26 | Minhthuminhthumingthu | 67 | view |
- In recent years, the structure of a family and the roles of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive or negative? 56
- New technologies have changed the way children their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 73
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? 61
- In recent years, the structure of a family and the roles of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive or negative? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...t 400 in January to about 1700 in June. which the highest of the chart. In contrast, ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t 400 in January to about 1700 in June. which the highest of the chart. In contrast, ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10218978102 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83343336092 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 106.607317073 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481751824818 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6759769273 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255890996767 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120369323329 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905922307645 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169441585637 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696039200022 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.