People should be open to new ideas and change his or her own mind to be successful.
Currently, based on the society full of fierce competition and ever-changing circumstance, it is difficult for us to catch up with the trend without keeping an eye on newly-emerging notions or ideas. Hence, some individuals propose that at the aim of becoming successful, people are supposed to be open to new ideas and adapt to these changes. Personally speaking, I concur with the opinion and there are a couple of reasons to account for my view.
To start with, mere with the open-mind can we get the upper hand during the rival with other individuals. Nowadays, some traditional industries have stretched to their limits. Meanwhile, since the society is continuously changing and the newly-emerging affairs tend to possess great potential to be excavated, people with open-mind are likely to maximize the use of these affairs based on the first-mover advantage. For instance, Jack Ma, one of the most successful businessmen in China, achieve success with his open mind. To be more specific, Jack Ma was aware of the great potential in e-commerce, then he, together with his partners, formed the company named Alibaba to start up the e-commerce, which was pioneering in 2000. Due to the large population in China, this company consequently possesses billions of customers, which entitles Jack Ma to be the most wealthy individual in China after the founding of it. This example illuminates that citizens with open mind are capable of gain a first-mover advantage, which enables them to succeed more easily.
What’s more, open-mind is also conducive for individuals to enlarge their social network, which helps them to discover potential existing opportunities during the interaction with more friends. Obviously, introverted people usually cannot step out of their shells, which prevents them from engaging in fresh affairs. The research conducted to evaluate the relationship between their social network and future achievement illuminates that individuals with greater aptitude of maintaining social network tend to become more successful. When researchers asked them which factor they reckon is the most significant one in their successes, 78% them chose open-minded, since they suggest that open-mind ensures that they can maintain interaction with other eminent people and these kinds of experience boosts them to imitate the same characteristics they have, which eventually leads to their achievement. In addition, there is an increasing number of new information ensuring individuals to catch up with the trend, thus without an open mind, individuals are probably lagged behind the era. Therefore, they cannot achieve success.
Admittedly, it is difficult for individuals to be open to new ideas since the process of changing is always full of unpleasant and frustration, nevertheless, perceiving the great reward we can obtain through changing, apparently, it is worthwhile to change our mind to adapt to the ever-changing society.
In a nutshell, since open-mind enables individuals to enhance their aptitude of information absorption, which means they are capable of accumulating newly-emerging information, and boost their social network, it is true that people ought to be open to new ideas ad alter their mind in order to achieve successes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ideas'' or 'idea's'?
Suggestion: ideas'; idea's
...rue that people ought to be open to new ideas ad alter their mind in order to achieve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, consequently, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2759.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44181459566 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0647117723 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508875739645 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 851.4 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4386693932 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.277777778 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270125642249 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884000034717 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849141517662 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184033256177 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511836346294 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 86.8835125448 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.