Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing sports teaches people important lessons about life.
Nowadays, a lot of people choose to release their pressures that have been accumulated from escalating pressures from competitions by various ways. One of them is doing sports, which not only helps release pressure, but also teaches people important lessons about life.
To begin with, playing sports shows people the importance of being persistent. And persistence stands out as one of the most essential traits imbedded by competitive people. For example, those who have a passion for running tend to be more patient and persistent when challenged by tasks which require large amounts of devotion, for the reason that running has carved the equation of “keep trying=positive change” into their mindsets. So they tend to solve problems with a positive attitude and being more patient and competitive during the process. And with this kind of persistence, they can almost solve every single problem in their lives.
What’s more, playing sports teaches a person how to work with others, which is the most required quality in today’s highly specified society. For example, when playing basketball, you can hardly score single-handedly, but to cooperate with your teammates to tear your opponent’s defense. Every superstar in the NBA is good at working with his teammates. Without the ability of working in a well-organized team, Stephan Curry, the most talented three-pointer shooter in history would not have won the championship. And without the ability to work in a coordinated manner, a person won’t be able to grow competitive in job market.
Last but not least, playing sports infuses us the appropriate attitude of handling wins and losses. As the old saying goes, “You win some and lose some”, we are supposed to learn to be humble after a win and optimistic after a loss. Furthermore, we also need to respect our opponent. In general, playing other people in sports and sports-like activities can help us cultivate such healthy mindsets.
In a nutshell, I strongly agree with the statement that playing sports can teach people important lessons based on the reasons that it can reveal the importance of persistence, teamwork, and humbleness and we can benefit from possessing such qualities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in general, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38591549296 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98255191895 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580281690141 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4979100572 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.470588235 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28650323095 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08743062088 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10227219847 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160720394524 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739916544422 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.