The article and the lecture are about glass which has presented a serious problem for wild birds because they cannot distinguish when they are flying, and therefore they crash through windows used as a material for building. The author in the passage believes that there are some methods that can solve this issue. However, the lecturer casts doubt on the statements made by the author. She thinks that these techniques would not stop this problem.
First, the author claims that the use of clear glass with one-way glass which means that is transparent in only one direction can be a great solution because birds may react to this new material and also it may not affect people, they will see out. Nevertheless, this idea is challenged by the lecturer who posits that it may bring about another issue. By doing this, this new material will reflect images of the sky like a mirror. Consequently, wild birds will be confused and will fly through buildings which imply this method as bad as the initial problem.
Second, the article states that a second method is to paint colorful lines or designs in the window, so birds can avoid trying to fly through the glass. Nonetheless, the lecturer discredits this idea by explaining that it can bring about other problems. Furthermore, she points out that birds may consider these designs as open-holes and may tend to fly through them.
Finally, the author mentions that creating an artificial instrument for generating a magnetic field is another solution because most of the birds use it as a migration pattern. The lecturer, on the other hand, puts forth the idea that this implementation will no be successful at all. Since birds just use this pattern for traveling long distances, it may not resemble this issue because most of the affected birds travel from one side of the city to the other one. Besides, during this migration birds use other signs as migration pattern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... the idea that this implementation will no be successful at all. Since birds just ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88990825688 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47314599308 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522935779817 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.336385458 49.2860985944 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06452816374 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229626564751 0.272083759551 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727461167583 0.0996497079465 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10432522571 0.0662205650399 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154432994885 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686477083185 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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