Supporters of technology say that it solves problems and makes life better. Opponents argue that technology creates new problems that may threaten or damage the quality of life.
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">here is no denying that techonology makes human's life better than before but it also brings some problems with it. i agree with the statement and demonstrate my views along with the reason in upcoming paragrapgh.
family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">
family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">To commence, with the propnents, technology helps people in various place and it is also help in time saving and man power. Moreover it also shrink the globe in village. people can easily interface in another country without any interuption. robots complete the work without any mistake and sometime it helps in difficult situation where man can lose their life but technology also save the human from that critical situations. To illustrate, robot can go in high voltage current to correct the problem but it can impssible to men to go there.
family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">
family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">On the other side it is absolutly right that technology creates various types of problems such as health issue like obesity and other diseses. Furthermore technonolgy make family far away from each other. For example, In one family if there are five menbers and sitting together, they all are busy with their mobiles and laptops and dont interact with each others. Apart from it there are lots of various reason is responsible because of technology like jobs opportunity because all the work done by machienes.
family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">
family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; box-sizing: border-box; color: rgb(51, 51, 51); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); outline: 0px !important;">family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">The conclusion can be incapsulated in one statement is that, technology have plethora of benifits but drawbacks can not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Family
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...t it also brings some problems with it. i agree with the statement and demonstrat...
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Suggestion: Family
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Suggestion: helped
... people in various place and it is also help in time saving and man power. Moreover ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...also help in time saving and man power. Moreover it also shrink the globe in village. pe...
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... saving and man power. Moreover it also shrink the globe in village. people can easily...
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...er it also shrink the globe in village. people can easily interface in another country...
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...nother country without any interuption. robots complete the work without any mistake a...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...h issue like obesity and other diseses. Furthermore technonolgy make family far away from e...
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...ecause all the work done by machienes. family: calibri, calibriregular, Arial, Helvet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2803.0 1207.87684729 232% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 425.0 242.827586207 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.59529411765 5.00649968141 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 3.92707691288 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98130857798 2.71678728327 147% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402352941176 0.580463131201 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 752.4 379.143842365 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.517737162 50.4703680194 502% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.583333333 104.977214359 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.4166666667 20.9669160288 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0579360546429 0.242375264174 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453889537329 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036098007785 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424373229864 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487232830056 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 12.6369458128 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.03 53.1260098522 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.9458128079 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.59 11.5310837438 187% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.94827586207 216% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.5123152709 209% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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