you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit
write a letter to your friend
In letter explain
the important event
apologize for the situation
suggest a new arrangement
Dear Jean,
Hi! how is everything? My youngest sister is getting married and we are all ecstatic. However, the ceremony date is on December 28, 2018. It is supposed to be the day of my flight to Canada to visit you. To make things worst, visitors received their invitations and one of the bridesmaid is yours truly.
She begged to change the dates of my trip, so I would like to apologize that I need to be with my sister first. This must be disappointing for you because all are set and the itinerary are printed already. It breaks my heart that you will be alone for the new year.
Anyway, we will still stick on what we have planned, like visiting old museum ,looking at picturesque scenery and eat plethora of food. So, how about January 7-12, 2019? Will it fit your busy schedule? Remember, you will be my personal tour guide.
Let me know if it is fine with you. I will be waiting for your reply. See you!
Love lots,
Anna ala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jean, Hi! how is everything? My youngest siste...
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Line 2, column 7, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
Dear Jean, Hi! how is everything? My youngest sister is ge...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... one of the bridesmaid is yours truly. She begged to change the dates of my tri...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irst. This must be disappointing for you because all are set and the itinerary ar...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e have planned, like visiting old museum ,looking at picturesque scenery and eat p...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, you will be my personal tour guide. Let me know if it is fine with you. I wi...
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for your reply. See you! Love lots, Anna ala
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, however, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38285714286 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34087721217 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668571428571 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9683176494 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.1333333333 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6666666667 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192255486643 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641202738127 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045259602493 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125694884861 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286666895844 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.94 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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