Dear John,
It’s been so long since we last were in touch, but I haven’t forgotten all the wonderful times we spent together last year. I have changed the date of my visit to Canada because of an important at home.
Regarding the event I mentioned earlier, it’s about the house warming of my only sibling. He finally won the money lottery after so many times of playing. Some of the proceeds were used to purchase this mansion. Given that I’m the only sibling he has, it’s expedient that I stay back and attend this impromptu event. It wouldn’t be if I don’t attend.
In addition to what I have said earlier, I’d like to apologize for any disappointment this have caused. Plans were made; I couldn’t make the trip because of the event at home. We would do everything we planned to do when I come visiting.
Lastly, I’d suggest that it’s preferable to visit during the summer or the Christmas period. Including other options wouldn’t be necessary, but we can always come up with a better plan that suits both parties.
All the best.
Adam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, It’s been so long since we last were in ...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...lottery after so many times of playing. Some of the proceeds were used to purchase this man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, lastly, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7807486631 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48245869271 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5784870549 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173747469254 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608152364604 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101922578288 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996436792314 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588317649851 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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