A person has found and sent back your lost driving licence
Write a letter and thank him
Explain why it is important
How he/she found
And say how to thank him/her
Dear Sir,
I would like to offer my gratitude for sending my lost driving license. I had no hope of recovering it after i lost it carelessly a month back while I travelling from Delhi to Jaipur in a train. I had also reported this to a local police station but unfortunately, they were unable to recover it.
After much of an effort, I had lost all hopes of redeeming it but all thanks to you that i have found it. Let me explain, this driving license is very important as I had applied for my passport and given it as a proof of identification for police verification.In event of a loss of such critical document, my passport application process would have suffered.Out of curiosity, I would like to know where did you find it?
There are not many people now of days who really help each other, but certainly, I would say you are an exception. This act of yours lays an example for everyone including me.I would like to know how can I thank you for such great help.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...e. I had no hope of recovering it after i lost it carelessly a month back while I...
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Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
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Suggestion: In
... identification for police verification.In event of a loss of such critical docume...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you soon. Yours faithfully, vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46875 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70654989357 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5635143958 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11032562255 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487108696944 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388048713253 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551242214913 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327894913008 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.