A person has found and sent back your lost driving licence
Write a letter and thank him
Explain why it is important
How he/she found
And say how to thank him/her
Dear John,
First of all, I love to give many thanks from bottom of my heart finding my driving licence which I was very worrying losing it. I used to drive my children include my friend's son to school every day. When I lost my card, I couldn't drive and faced lots of difficulties with children transportation to school. This gave too much pressure to my friend and me.
I was amazed how you find it. I just remember the last time I used it , it was at the bank when the clerk asked me for additional ID. I didn't noticed it felt down from my purse while I was putting my bank statement book and my wallet inside it. Luckily you find it. I am so happy and appreciate your kindness being responsible and send it to my address mentioned on the card.
I being gratitude for your kindness, I would like to invite you for a coffee whenever you have free time on this weekend. I hope that you like the thank you card attaching to the letter. People like you show that there still are good human beings around.
I am looking forward to meet you in person.
Best wishes
Mae
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
Dear John, First of all, I love to to give many thanks from bottom of my hear...
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Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...chool every day. When I lost my card, I couldnt drive and faced lots of difficulties wi...
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Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ren transportation to school. This gave to much pressure to my friend and me. I w...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... I just remember the last time I used it , it was at the bank when the clerk asked...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n the clerk asked me for additional ID. I didnt noticed it felt down from my purs...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...the clerk asked me for additional ID. I didnt noticed it felt down from my purse whil...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...t to my address mentioned on the card. I being gratitude for your kindness, I wo...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ver you have free time on this weekend. I hope that you like the thank you card a...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e on this weekend. I hope that you like the thank you card attaching to the letter. Peopl...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...n beings around. I am looking forward to meet you in person. Best wishes Mae
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, still, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23414634146 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29502324185 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2428337407 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800042545926 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298638853985 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329769256538 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049538675072 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178845851137 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.