Main reason for migration to/from the UK-2007
The charts compare the key factors that influenced the migrant’ decisions to and from the Uk in 2007
Overall, what stands out from the chart that definite job was the most common reason for the migrants to move in and out the UK. The percentage of immigrants coming to the UK for formal study was just over sixth-time higher than those of emigrants.
When it comes to immigration, the highest category fell into definite job, which represented 30% of total reasons. The similar pattern was found on emigration with 29% highest proportion of people emigrating from the Uk for work. It can be seen that while 26% of people went to Britain for formal study, this figure was much higher than that of emigrants for the same reason. By contrast, the category of seeking for a job in immigration made up 12% of total while the figure was doubled that for the same category in emigration. In terms of accompany join, these figures for migration were similar, at about 14% each.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '29% the highest'.
Suggestion: 29% the highest
...ar pattern was found on emigration with 29% highest proportion of people emigrating from th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73099415205 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54340924963 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2322257627 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316958932219 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129560295714 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816168510835 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2147903233 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00767341793694 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.