You recently stayed in a hotel large City was very unusual for the time of the year and the heating cooling system in the hotel was quite indicate
Give detail What was wrong
what you had to do for overcome
Say what action you would like the manage to hotel
Dear Sir
I am a student of IMS college and study in 2nd year. I stay in your hostel on Ist floor in room no. 7.I am new in hostel and I have some major issues there which makes me uneasy to live here.
firstly,this place is in a large city but there was something unusual for the time of the year and the heating cooling system in the hotel was quite indicated. that was petrified for me and even I was afraid to go all alone. there was someone else who used to do mischieveous like that however, not only me but other people who are there never dared to go alone even in the campus area.
One of my mate told me about her experience that when she was alone in her roonm than suddenly cooling system got heated so much as her room turned into fire. she even didnot know what to do.
but I think faculty should take some necessary steps regarding this problem. And try to find the solution as soon as posiible. first thing that you all can do is check all the electronoc items, is it working properly or not.
I am looking for your reply
Yours Sincerely
Mahi Sethi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2270531401 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11045325206 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657004830918 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8887513749 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9166666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292493313522 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848302771531 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112444061151 0.0603063233224 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114430224249 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108126081493 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.