You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
1) Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
2) Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
3) Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir/ Madam
I want break to complete my qualification. Handling both things together is next impossible for me. I have done my masters in English but I want to do further study for upgrading myself and for my future.
I also want off because I am shifting in Bengaluru from Delhi and I will do my further studies from Bengaluru's university.When my qualifications will complete than definitely I will join your office again. And it will help me to explore myself as well as learn a lot regarding my job. This will be beneficial for you.
It is an opportunity for me to upgrade my job profile so that I can update myself too. If I want to change my post than for that I have to be updated .I want to do progress in my career by leaps and bound. So please cooperate with me.
Yours truly
Mahi Sethi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...ther studies from Bengalurus university.When my qualifications will complete than de...
^^^^
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ther studies from Bengalurus university.When my qualifications will complete than de...
^^^^
Line 6, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... post than for that I have to be updated .I want to do progress in my career by le...
^^
Line 6, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ost than for that I have to be updated .I want to do progress in my career by lea...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39735099338 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7262737843 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9104035816 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175171225547 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745388912295 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580395879809 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120976026704 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519283832413 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.