You have just come back from a holiday overseas. When you arrived back, you discovered that the airline had lost your suitcase. Write to the Customer Relations department of the airline. In your letter
• explain the situation
• describe the suitcase and its contents
• say what you want the airline to do
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I would like to lodge an official complaint about my suitcase which was misplaced by your airline.
I have traveled on Serene Airline flight no. SR 245 from Bangkok to Karachi the day before yesterday. When I reached at the luggage counter to collect my possession I was shocked to hear that my suitcase was no present there, despite personally checking each luggage. I have proactively contacted your loss and damage department and have submitted written application, copy of which is available with me.
It is a beige color suitcase made of synthetic leather and triangular logo of “Travel Guy” is embossed on the front. Suitcase also carries a name tag of my initials, as F.K. This suitcase holds a great value to me as I bought some expensive mobile phones, clothes and shoes worth $ 2,500 for my siblings.
I would appreciate if you can expedite search efforts for my suitcase and produce it by the end of this week. Alternatively, I demand compensation of $ 3,000 per your airlines policy on loss and damage of goods.
I am looking forward for a prompt action from you.
Yours faithfully,
Farrukh Zaman Kayani
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-17 | vinshu koul | 89 | view |
| 2019-01-31 | abhisheksaxena | 78 | view |
| 2018-12-18 | Farrugh | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
... mobile phones, clothes and shoes worth $ 2,500 for my siblings. I would apprec...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
...Alternatively, I demand compensation of $ 3,000 per your airlines policy on loss an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79086762629 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69587628866 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7931147571 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185514687507 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688191290626 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341950249843 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100476902537 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346474178564 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.