Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
In the past few decades , the advancement of medicines were checked on diseased humans but in recent times , with greater influence of modernisation , various drugs are formed which are implemented on different animals , this topic asserts that these experiment should be banned because it is got to be consider that is harmful for fauna while other are in their favour . This essay will outlines a both argument in detail and provides the personal opinion regarding this below
To initiate on , animals are made to balance the nature if they getting reduced on daily basis there would be a such devastating results where we can never imagine to that extent . Many pharmaceutical industries are tend to check their drugs on innocent animals where some medicine includes a allergetic content which is injurious for faunas for instance there was survey conducted by anti killing animal agency where some opponents were hardly able to know about that , there were 12 million animals slaughter by pharmaceutical industries just for testing purpose and that is why many people are in same opinion to ban the these sort of activities
On the contrary side , other people are behalf of using the animals for testing purpose because they think if this thing happens there would be dramatic decline to cure the catostrophic ailments like malaria , Measles and Diptheria and also tend to belive about huge lose in pharmaceutical industries where the no more able to find a source of testing the drugs
in conclusion , animals are not a thing of using for other purpose such as decoration show piece as well as making a clothes of it , even they got a right to live on earth as we do . We should do a some sort of arrangement to save animals and government should penalize his or her if someone attempts to do the same
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91530944625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68813118585 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57003257329 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.2975951904 374% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 341.124885489 49.4020404114 691% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 377.25 106.682146367 354% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.75 20.7667163134 370% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.25 7.06120827912 443% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275857259122 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150747467724 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806442395411 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160495338756 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256615063458 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.1 13.0946893788 306% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.66 50.2224549098 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 11.3001002004 291% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.1190380762 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.