technology has made children less creative than they were in the pass.
Undoubtedly, technology is one of the most important aspect in our life. technology has simplified people´s lives, including children´s lives. In the past, the access of education was more difficult than today, so children learned a few thinks by their own. I disagree that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past because technology has opened a broaden ways of learning.
Firstly, technology offers many educational entertainment programs for children. By having access to internet or TV, it is possible to find out programs to increase intellectual activity. For example, it can be use to play puzzle, or chess. Moreover, there are a lot of webpages available for learning artistic subjects, such as playing an instrument, painting, or learning to dance. Thus, it is not necessary for children to have a teacher during the all day for the learning and creativity development.
Second, technology plays a role on solving problems, making children more creative. it is clear that nowadays when someone has a problem, people look for answers on internet. The same happens to children when they have a questions about the homework, for example, they can look for it on internet. Or when they have a doubt about some game, they also look answers on internet. technology makes more independent children since they can solve problems by themselves.
Finally, with the use of technological devices, children learn quickly to use new machines. many young children do not know to speak or read but they know to use cellphones for looking videos on youtube, or for sending voices and figures to their lovers. As they grow, they are accustomed to using technology devices and it is easier for them to learn to use new machines such as computers, electronic devices and others.
In conclusion, technology has made self- taught children who can look for solving problems. nowadays, children are faster learner than in the past thanks to many devices available for them to use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Technology
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Suggestion: used
...ectual activity. For example, it can be use to play puzzle, or chess. Moreover, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15548780488 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87741408618 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542682926829 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5425546644 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33234478758 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112950030172 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120305444681 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200282273969 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114928659927 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.