Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
It is argued that government should stop allocating money for arts and its related fields, instead they should budget these funds on other beneficial activities. I completely agree that finances should be allocated in a way that helps in upliftment of the overall society.
There are several reasons why I would argue against spending funds on fields of arts such as Architecture, Sculpture, Literature, Paintings, Music, Performing and Film etc. Firstly, Art is not benefitting everyday lives of the general population. Allocating funds to improve or sustain art activities will not help with the problems faced by a larger section of society. For example, Building and maintaining art museums, art exhibitions, theaters is expensive and has very low impact in the upliftment of the society. Secondly, Expenditure in the fields of arts can be considered fair if the parity gap between the rich and poor is less. Allowing all sections of society to claim benefits and leisure from introduction of art activities.
On the contrary, if the government improves budget allocation for other essential needs of the society such as public services, could bring a positive change in the lives of all members of society. Additional budget will help in improving day-to-day public services such as health, law, and order, fire protection etc. This additional funds can be utilized in better education of students with modern techniques. It can be utilized to build better roads and connectivity reducing transportation time and fuel. This change will help in pulling a greater number of people out of poverty.
In conclusion, I assert that removing expenditure on arts by government will help in the overall development of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28623188406 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94560315128 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9376266381 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177545934518 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614629741114 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390593890759 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998706661149 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274934321098 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.