In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regarded it as completely wrong while others consider it as a valuable work experience.
To what extend do you agree or disagree.
People have a different view on child labour. Some people think it is a valuable experience for children to prepare for a competitive world. Personally, I believe children should not drag to work it imposes a detrimental effect on society and individuals.
Having children engaged in paid work cause an adverse effect on society. Paid employment interferences schooling by deprived children of the opportunity to attend school. A Statistics by UNICEF show that half of the children engaged in paid work leave school at an early stage. The low literacy rate makes early school leavers are less likely than their more-educated counterparts to secure stable jobs. In long-term, under accumulation of human capital caused by low literacy rate, representing a missed opportunity to enhance productivity and future earnings of the next generation; their offspring, as a result, will be compelled to work to supplement the family’s income. In this way, poverty and child labour passed from generation to generation
Child labour causes a harmful effect on children physically and physiologically. Studies show that children working in factories and mines operate machinery, use chemicals, and are exposed to high or very cold temperatures, which ultimately endangers their lives. Statistics by UNICEF shows that the victims of occupational accidents aged between 11-14 twice as often as they are adults. The lack of personal experience and physical maturity puts their lives in dangers. Apart from adverse physical effect, child labourers are also experience different behavioural problems, such as using obscene words, exhibiting high emotions with low creativity and relying on excess use of cigarettes and alcohol.
In conclusion, child labour imposes harm to the community and individuals. The government should do all necessary actions to eradicate children engaged in paid employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, apart from, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62369337979 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13834205216 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.5807576871 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167538311947 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643016066 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646537368554 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109404106747 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495295177608 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.