A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
People have different view about animal welfare. In my view, human beings have no right to manipulate the lives of animals and all living creatures on the planet should be treated equally.
There are two main reasons why it could be argued that animals should be exploited by human beings. Firstly, people use animals to strike for survival. For example, The temperature of Mongolia can drop to minus 30-degree Celsius , people in Mongolia hunt for hares and foxes. They are not hunting for fun, but for fox’s fur which helps to keep them warm in an extremely cold climate. In addition, experimenting on animal helps us to cure diseases. Finally, it is believed that animals do not feel pain as much as humans, so it is morally acceptable to kill animals for food.
However, I do not believe all the above arguments stand up to scrutiny. Animal testing in cosmetics experiments seems unnecessary as it is nothing to do with human survival. Besides, there are abundant documentaries shown that the sensational feeling of animals is as strong as human beings. They do feel fear and pain during slaughtering. Also, researches proven that human can get all kinds of nutrients from green vegetables and fruits.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that exploitation of animals is justified, my own view is that animals do deserve ethical treatment from humans.
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- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at ant early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents an 56
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and 56
- In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regarded it as completely wrong while others consider it as a valuable work experience. To what extend do you agree or disagree. 78
- some people believe that studying ar university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...olia can drop to minus 30-degree Celsius , people in Mongolia hunt for hares and f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01731601732 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70697548205 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5339016049 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7857142857 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377718964958 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124993768872 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075239632014 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212978692189 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789843059954 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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