Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform and arrange my family getaway we planned. We have heard a lot of wonderful and fascinating news about your property and decided to spend our weekend family get together in your establishment.
We are a family of five. My wife and two children aged six and three will be happy to spend in a hotel nearer the beach. We decided to check-in on coming Friday 28th March and check-out on Monday 31st Mar.
Ideally, we would like to get a deluxe corner room on a higher floor with a double bed. The room must be away from the clubs and pubs which you most probably have in your facility. I assume the corner rooms are away from the lifts, so my children will have a good night sleep without noise from the lifts.
I would appreciate if you could revert to me soon with the availability and total cost for the weekend.
Yours faithfully,
Stanley John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... March and check-out on Monday 31st Mar. Ideally, we would like to get a deluxe c...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st for the weekend. Yours faithfully, Stanley John
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Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...end. Yours faithfully, Stanley John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50303030303 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32757258169 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4357164454 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213188741893 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750290510414 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450657219943 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117276382733 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212341689345 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.