Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
Nowadays, space exploration is one possible solution for solving world problems like overpopulation which attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. Some people believe that space exploration will expand human knowledge that could lead to possible discoveries that would help human race in the future. This essay will discuss both sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why space exploration is important and the most conspicuous one stems in the fact that scientist could discover life outside Earth. There is a possibility that people could survive in another planet besides Earth. A hypothesis formulated by a prestigious university saying that there is a probability that water and oxygen is abundant in other planet that could provide life to people. Thus, space exploration is important to validate such hypothesis that could lead us to possible discovery of life outside Earth.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks that can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of space exploration and the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that it requires huge amount of resources to make such expedition. Some politician argued that funds must be utilized to solve present problems like poverty, lack of educational system and low health care services. Therefore, space exploration should be less prioritized.
This essay discussed several compelling arguments on space exploration. I profoundly believe that the benefit of exploring outer space far outweigh its drawback. Not only do the advantages of space exploration prove the significance of its effect on society, but also pinpoint improving lifetime implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57633587786 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94669589947 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1757856685 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430362869742 0.242375264174 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148444034702 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13968199997 0.071462118173 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236361057901 0.151781067708 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918380145331 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.