You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
- describe a news story in your country
- explain why people are interested in it
- say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Miranda,
I hope you are well. Sorry, have n’t been in touch. With the deadlines around the corner, I've been occupied with university assignments. I was very pleased you receive your letter last week.
I am happy to share with you that the Indian government has finally taken a revolutionary step towards indiscrimination. They have legalized L.G.B.T (Lesbian, gay, bisexual and transgender) rights, declaring section 377 as unconstitutional.
A democracy like ours has been facing legal and social difficulties for one’s sexual orientation and preferences. It was necessary to break the shackles of conservative mindsets and step into an era of accepting and respecting individual choices.
I have finally come out of the closet and expressed to my friends and family about my inclination towards other women. Most of them have been very supportive. Homosexuality has existed in ancient India, Kama Sutra is an explicit example of the same.
I recall having a long chat with you about same-sex marriages. Well, I thought that it will be a good idea to share this liberating piece of news with you. Give my regards to your parents. Awaiting your response!
Warm regards,
Kathy
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-01 | aditithakker | 78 | view |
| 2019-10-21 | mansoureh | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-16 | Tolik | 89 | view |
| 2019-09-17 | manas | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-21 | DoaaOkaila | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Miranda, I hope you are well. Sorry, have n'...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
.... With the deadlines around the corner, Ive been occupied with university assignmen...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...scrimination. They have legalized L.G.B.T Lesbian, gay, bisexual and transgender ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3125 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04537445244 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697916666667 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.309803486 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163712767095 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535144257456 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571957696719 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823538900922 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698785567038 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.