Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends. Others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and appreciation.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, natural resources such as fresh water water " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">have been declined dramatically, however, simultaneously the demand for this invaluable and vital element for living are are " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">esclating due to some critical circumstances. In this essay i will look through causes of this increasing trend and will propose some solutions.
Turning to the roots, firstly the underlying reason for such tremendous need is definitely overpopulation during the few past decades. that is to say, while the number of people is rapidly increasing, consequently immense volume of water water " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">is extracted from underground resources. The solution is for the governments to control effectively the overcrowding and then leading to revitalise and preserve water as opposed to huge consumptions. Furthermore, it it " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">was proved that global warming can affect weather and climate patterns that will result in decreasing rainfalls as well as snowfalls which will be covered in mountains' peak to be used in summer times. To address is issue, governments around the world world " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">must bound together to allocate budget for lessening gradually world's temperature by two degrees centigrade. that would restore climate patterns to former situation and disastrous outcomes such as drought could be seized. Finally, the last but absolutely not least reason for this phenomenon is non standard consumption based on authentic geological location of communities. To put it in simple words there are some places in world that water scarcity is inevitable and obvious, but irrational use is putting a lot of strain on nature. To tackle this people need to modernise their infrastructures to keep pace with current resourviors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: water
... years, natural resources such as fresh water water ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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...ave been declined dramatically, however, simultaneously the demand for this inval...
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...invaluable and vital element for living are are ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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... to keep pace with current resourviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.19504643963 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.81983627308 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572755417957 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.750752309 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.909090909 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0221999432613 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.012395839025 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0112072623407 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0190417250181 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00701393340407 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.0946893788 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.27 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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