The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

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The table below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

Submitted by Vikuns on Thu, 01/10/2019 - 09:23

The tables illustrate coffee and bananas sales in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in the years 1999 and 2004.

Overall, at the beginning of the period, coffee and bananas were the most sold product in Switzerland, while coffee and bananas contributed at least to the sales in Sweden and in Belgium, respectively. In comparison, at the end of the period, coffee was the most favourite product in the UK and bananas comprised the biggest part of sales in Switzerland.

The biggest rise in the market of the coffee was in the UK from 1.5 million euros in 1999 to 20 million euros in 2004. In Switzerland, the coffee sales increased twice per 5 years. The proportions of the sales of the coffee in the other countries were approximately the same in the years 1999 and 2004, such as: in the Denmark 1.8 and 2, in the Belgium 1 and 1.8 and in the Sweden 0.8 and 1, respectively.

bananas comprised the highest part of the market in Switzerland and rose more than three times from 1999 to 2004. In contrast to the coffee sales, the bananas market declined in the few countries. In Sweden, sales of bananas decreased from 1.8 to 1 million euros and in Denmark from 2 to 0.9 in the years 1999 and 2004 respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bananas
... the Sweden 0.8 and 1, respectively. bananas comprised the highest part of the marke...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, at least, in contrast, such as, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62272727273 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70054708262 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.377272727273 0.547539520022 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1075916285 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205195535793 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109265379489 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336669915595 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153755668454 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268102188002 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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