The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The tables provide the information about the change sales of fairtrade-labelled for coffee and bananas (million euros) in five countries in 1999 compared to 2004.

Overall, there was an upward trend in sales of coffee in all countries, while the majority of countries increased, except sweden and denmark for bananas.

Based on the first table, the sales of fairtrade-labelled of coffee in the United Kingdom experienced the highest increase at 8.5 million euros in 2004. while, the second of levels was switzerland which was a two-folded increase in the end of period. And, the rest of countries went up slightly just under 0.3 respectively.

Looking at the next table, A citizen's switzerland was the first rank of country consuming bananas compared to other countries, by 32 million euros between 1999 and 2004. Then, both UK and Belgium were enormously rose just over 3.4 million euros. Otherwise, sweden and denmark were sharply decline made up 0.8 and 1.1 in 2004.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... increase at 8.5 million euros in 2004. while, the second of levels was switzerland w...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... increase at 8.5 million euros in 2004. while, the second of levels was switzerland w...
^^^^^
Line 19, column 213, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...en, both UK and Belgium were enormously rose just over 3.4 million euros. Otherwise,...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23899371069 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92058298836 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7678811983 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208882069767 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902186089639 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120198510445 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153827096458 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131958551744 0.0819641961636 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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